October Girl

'Ello Sam! I'm Max. Welcome!

Well..... everyone already said it. Welcome to YWS. -Max

I like it. Re-minds me about video games! I give it a 7/10

Since most of you have read Twilgiht, New Moon, or Eclipse. I wanted to ask you this, which would you be? Vampire? Were wolf? (I threw in something extra) Or ...

My eyes are not closed, but they don't feel open. My surroundings are unknown. The words I have spoken, in pieces. They are broken. The air is the room is ...

Court, I think Hunter is right about the character. What does he/she look lie? I think you could add just a couple more sentences.... maybe if you'd like. Hope this ...

I don't know which annoys me most, if they sleep in a coffin or if they don't sleep at all. I think it would be better if we keep it ...

That scares me, but I'll rate it at 7/10

Very cute, innocent pose. I like it you get a 8/10

Hello, all new members my name is Max. If you need any help at all feel free yo PM me or anyone else. Hope this helps enjoy the site! -Max

Jess, I think you could make this longer, more detailed. Obviously the charaters outside but where? Where is the dripping coming from? What is it, rain, snow? I really wan ...

Hey Percy, and all new members, I'm Max (I'm a chick) Welcome feel free to PM me or anyone else. Again welcome to YWS -Max

whoops! Sorry. My bad :lol:

The only one was me, the only one you refused to see. No matter what they said I was the only one. I'm the only one who doesn't breathe. I'm ...

hm.... 6/10 intresting